舞曼西楼2007-02-23 20:09:31回复悄悄话
It's so interesting you can predict what you will fell after you look at the pic. Although we can have slightly deferent feelings (such as I felt nervous and yy felt restless), but these feelings are in the same line.
So art is no kidding! And is so important to be truthful to yourself.
Thanks
影云2007-02-23 17:35:29回复悄悄话
"restless" is what i feel . . .:)
~&~2007-02-23 14:39:23回复悄悄话
i can sense the "nervous" quality in your poem .... abtract stuff is best for "nervous stuff"..... :)
舞曼西楼2007-02-23 10:48:06回复悄悄话
Agreed about the nail part. Get rid of the 窈窕淑女
This picture’s color, roughness and smoothness, her body position give me “阴性", rigid and dream-like dark feeling. When I wrote the poem, I felt nerves.
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So art is no kidding! And is so important to be truthful to yourself.
Thanks
This picture’s color, roughness and smoothness, her body position give me “阴性", rigid and dream-like dark feeling. When I wrote the poem, I felt nerves.
Thanks
在芦苇的背面
那窈窕淑女散落的指甲
.....
“窈窕淑女”这个词被人烂用了，太俗了已经。
不如用‘她脱落的指甲’[？？]
but the poem kinda matches the image's mood ....
cheers!