将士魂 （仿楚辞体）

 

 

挥长剑兮碎九日，削泰山兮填河决。
战共工于不周兮，旌旗堕兮援兵绝。
罡风啸吼兮苍穹摇，碧草血染兮车轴折。
身百伤兮犹苦斗，形虽摧兮神不灭。

幽影悠悠兮慰未亡，卿节哀兮可梦高唐。
伤时势兮之不我与，悲志未伸兮身已没。
哀孤孀之艰辛兮，恨君臣之无智节。
生有运数兮死有期，天道如轮兮未可寄。
魂魄归来兮系潇湘，情难断兮地久天长。

[清云]

Dear Guest Try:

Thank you for your poem. Since I do not know much about English poems, I am not be able to comment. No doubt, you poem is correct politically. You should formally put your poem into Wenxuecity, so more people can see it.
Regards,