In Her Dream He Is a Beast with a Tender Heart

In Her Dream He Is a Beast with a Tender Heart In her dream he is a beast with a tender heart. Everything he touches catches fire, sending electric shocks through her spine. Every word he speaks is a thrown rock, making the still surface of her maiden lake ripple. He fills her with terror and pride, lust and desire. She feels empty and fulfilled at the same time. Two hearts beating against each other while the purple rain quietly falls in the green shades of bamboo in the corner of her eyes. + z.z. 2005

[by水滴]

Yes, I do have the 5,000s mega Karoake. Honestly speaking, I didn't find much that I like. Mostly GangTai boring songs or the very old time patriotic songs...:))

Well, I post another one upstairs, I guess it is either late 90s or early 2000s.

[LTG]

SD,

i don't like the "whinning" type either :)

but i know there are many later songs--from late 90s'---are also okay to sing and listen to...

:)

i thought you'd have one of those "mega karaoke" database that has 1000s songs to choose from....

oh, i have problems posting too sometimes on other posts....so i don't think it's your music link....

i like music links here....we need more....:)

thanks!!

[by水滴]

LTG: I would like you to recommend more newer songs!!

For whatever the reasons, I don't resonant with the newer pop songs much. Not much deep feelings, only babbling and whining.

Actually I like Western song more, but can't sing them well. :))

//

Everytime, when I post a song here, I had trouble to reply. Do you think that it has something to do with the song posting? If so, I don't want to create problem to your blog.

[LTG]

SD,

like your song very much!!!

noticed that your songs are all from certain "era" :))

do you have any "newer" songs recorded??

in this song, you are freeing your voice more, it sounds....the feelings...

thank you for sharing your "--fishing"!!!

YY & HuangShan,

thanks for the translations!!!

both your versions are very well-done....am still reading and

rereading them....cheers!!!!

P.S.

me too, was surprised by the ending....

:)

[黄衫客]

对不起，忘了说，搬了影云的一些。。。：）

[黄衫客]

也来试一下。：）


在梦中，他是一头柔情的兽


在梦中
他是一头柔情的兽
他的触摸
都燃成了火
激荡着她的脉络
他的话语
如掷落的石
搅乱平静的湖面
荡起涟漪无数

他倾注着
恐惧与骄傲、诱惑与渴望
她感受着
虚无与满足，在同一个时刻
两颗心贴在一起
跳动着
跳动着
她的眼角，紫色的雨
在绿色的竹影里
静静飘落。。。


作舟，很喜欢你诗中的最后一句，a little surprise. :)

[影云]

他是她梦中柔情的野兽

他是她梦中柔情的野兽
所触之处，着火燃烧，沿着
她的脊背传送震颤。
他说的每一个字是扔出的石，
在她平静的少女湖面泛起涟漪

他以恐惧与骄傲，诱惑与渴望，来倾注她
她同时感受着空与满
两颗心紧靠着跳动
她的眼角里，紫色的雨
在绿色的竹影里
静静飘落。。。

[by水滴]

This version I didn't sing well, but matches with the music better. The other version, I sang better, but didn't follow the music.

Hope LTG will stop saying that I am "self-fishing"...:)

[知凡]

双鱼座！！！又是一个水像星座的，不怪那么多泪。。。：）

生活中彼得潘的原型却很惨。。。我也喜欢那部童话剧，和那个童话作家。。。几乎每个童话作家都with a Tender Heart。。。和对自然、纯朴天性的热情。。。童话我以为常是现实悲剧的映照。。。彼得潘的原型事实上是一个极其忧伤的孩子。。。Neverland，一个Neverland。。。

“写诗其实是危险的，如所有真的东西都危险一样。”。。。

大胆胆大地面对“真”，“a Beast with a Tender Heart”或许有希望。。。是“真”的王子。。。

：）

[LTG]

美人鱼: "LTG， 你不读童话吧？！美女与野兽啊！你的这首诗就很合这篇童话呢！"

really??? :))))

i have heard of it.....maybe there is some connection there.....

like ZF said in her review that my poems are not "stories".....not for children especially :)))))))

cheers to you all!!!!

[地中海人鱼]

我也很很很很很很喜欢童话。我双鱼座啊

童话为什么都有美好的结尾？但是很多童话仍带着悲剧的色彩---只有成人能明白吧？或许也会让孩子在幼小的心灵中存下一丝疑惑，WHICH 伴着他们慢慢成长。彼得潘就很聪明，宁肯被女孩子笑话，也不回去，哈哈。。。 我也不想回去。

紫罗兰的雨静静地飘落。。。

[知凡]

"it maybe a 王子 in z.z.'s head ...."

该不会就是[ ]吧。。。

我已经知道“答案”了。。。

:)))))))

[知凡]

在她的眼角,竹子绿色的疏影里

紫色的雨静静地落...

对，美人鱼说得没错！！！！小美人鱼，我可喜爱安徒生了，你是否是依据安徒生童话里的美人鱼取的名字？？？

“美人鱼”，“丑小鸭”，“皇帝的新衣”，“卖火柴的小女孩”。。。

虽是童话，但是里面同样蕴含深奥。。。。

[地中海人鱼]

在她的眼角,竹子绿色的疏影里

紫色的雨静静地落...

不用想啦，当然是这句更好！

LTG， 你不读童话吧？！美女与野兽啊！你的这首诗就很合这篇童话呢！

[LTG]

“a Beast with a Tender Heart” 童话里的某位王子？？？

i don't think so....:)))))

it maybe a 王子 in z.z.'s head ....

:)))))

[知凡]

feels like you have to use compensation when translating this one...
（!!!!!!!明白了。。。）
...
在她的眼角,竹子绿色的疏影里

紫色的雨静静地落...

or,

紫色的雨静静地落在她眼角

竹子绿色的疏影里
...

都很好，我再感受一下哪句更好。。。。

这首诗里包含很多词与意对比矛盾里的平衡，对比的搭配，感受强烈但又感觉很CLICK。。。

“a Beast with a Tender Heart” 童话里的某位王子？？？ :)

这首诗居然让人想起童话来，又是“矛盾”。。。

[LTG]

....

在她的眼角,竹子绿色的疏影里

紫色的雨静静地落...

or,

紫色的雨静静地落在她眼角

竹子绿色的疏影里


( ? ? :)


feels like you have to use compensation when translating this one...

good job!!!

thank you again, zf, for your wonderful review!!!

[知凡]

"她的梦中他是头野兽有一颗温柔的心"



她的梦中他是头野兽有一颗温柔的心

所有他的触摸擦起火焰 发出

电击的震动穿透她的脊柱

每一个他说的字是一块丢来的石子

在她寂静的少女湖面击起涟漪



他填满了她 惊骇与骄傲 情欲与渴望

她感受着空和满足 在同一时刻

心倚着心 两颗心跳动

她的眼角紫色的雨静静地落在

竹子绿色的疏影里

[影云]

不是的?!?

哟哟，俺眼睛
走了神
。
。

原来 是
一个
大筐盆！！！

：))))

[LTG]

圈套?!?

我可不会

玩儿

那一套!!


:))))

[影云]

吓了我一跳
还以为
踩了个圈套

谢谢分享！！！

:)

[LTG]

正要关机, 却
被你打了
伏击


:))


谢谢影云的短平快!!!

[影云]

So musical, beautiful, delightful!!!
Love it : )

Of course, . . . (full of tempta-shi-o-n) . . .