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Cotton in the Field

(2022-11-02 21:40:20) 下一个

《Cotton in the Field》

autumn gentle wind kisses the cotton bolls
bolls crack open
fluffy cotton exposed with big smiles
white
like the cloud in the blue sky
look at each other, cheering
we're sisters and brothers 

they're picked
transported to factories
made into clothes
some go to rich's home
some go to poor's
some go to between's

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CBA7 回复 悄悄话 这首诗表面上写的是田里的棉花,深层次里是借用拟人的方式写人在社会中的命运不同,尽管他们生来是兄弟姐妹,是平等的。

This poem is about life, fate, and society.

CBA7 回复 悄悄话 回复 '烟酒嗓' 的评论 : 谢谢诗人歌星雅临赏读,谢谢你的解读和鼓励。

烟酒嗓 回复 悄悄话 好诗!充满了对生命的尊重与怜悯!
CBA7 回复 悄悄话 回复 '菲儿天地' 的评论 : 谢谢菲儿赏读和鼓励。

菲儿天地 回复 悄悄话 some go to rich's home
some go to poor's
some go to between's

好诗,太有意思了!:)
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