亲爱的同网朋友,我最近一直在改我的故事,我的Love That Cat又有新的版本了。这次的修改是历史性的,我将原来的84 verses的长故事,分成6章,每一章讲一个相对独立的小故事。这样一来,孩子们读起来轻松些,章与章之间能有个break停顿,将来还可以在这些地方配上插图。 过两天,我再贴新的版本。下面是改的几个verses (old) I named the new cat Mimi. She would be my best friend. A good time together, We would happily spend. (new) I named the new cat Mimi. She'd be my best friend, I knew. We'd happily play together. I'd be her best friend, too!
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I went to her round plate. A bit of cat food,I took. I pretended to eatit. She came closer to look. (new) I went to Mimi's plate and Took some cat food, with a smile. I pretended to eat it. She stared at me for a while.
(old) Let's solve the mystery. Mimi made up her mind. Behind the big mirror, A clue, she went to find. (new) Mimi made up her mind Let's solve the mystery now. She went behind the mirror. I heard her sharply say,"Meow!" |